Comments : Beauty

  • 20 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Hey, not many great poems on this website are devoted to the beautiful things in life, they are either about people or about sadness. This was a good poem and a good topic. You spelled the world divine wrong, but that is fine, you can edit that out. Sometimes you added commas in your poem where I didn't think they were necessary or appropriate, but that is a stylistical choice. Good job!