Correction Dream

by H E Losey   Aug 8, 2008


Can anyone imagine
The life they may have led
If mistakes could be corrected
Each night while in our bed

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I think there's more you want to say, but you just aren't saying it. Keep going with this one, it needs more. It's just kind of like a quote, and you haven't captured my attention at all yet.