Depressive Bliss: An I'm Sorry Poem

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Aug 8, 2008


Too tired to write
Too dead to feel like this
Emotional trauma
Or depressive bliss

I hate laying awake
Too tired to try sleeping
Wanting to hold you still
Forget every other feeling

Empty here inside my thoughts
In this empty house
The poems that float in my head
Have no idea what they're about

Another apology poem
I'm sorry for being like this
Sometimes I get so numb
I can't know it until it's missed

Love, I'm sorry for everything
And for everything I'm not
But I will always love you
I told you, but you forgot

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow. So first, this was great...but aren't they always. I ((ME)) get jealous of your ((YOU)) poetry. Just in case you didn't know that. And this was sort of relatable in that, numb with a hundred things to say, but none of them mean a thing sort of way..

    Love, I'm sorry for everything
    And for everything I'm not
    But I will always love you
    I told you, but you forgot

    ^^ I really really love this stanza, jesse. honest. it's just...idk. the last line is heart breaking...

    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by iM LYiNG tO MY SELf

    OMG!!! LOVED this!!! It was very cute and the rythm flowed very nicely!! Plus this is exactally how I feel right now!! GREAT JOB!! Def deserves a 5/5!! :D