OMG!!! LOVED this!!! It was very cute and the rythm flowed very nicely!! Plus this is exactally how I feel right now!! GREAT JOB!! Def deserves a 5/5!! :D

Wow. So first, this was great...but aren't they always. I ((ME)) get jealous of your ((YOU)) poetry. Just in case you didn't know that. And this was sort of relatable in that, numb with a hundred things to say, but none of them mean a thing sort of way..

Love, I'm sorry for everything
And for everything I'm not
But I will always love you
I told you, but you forgot

^^ I really really love this stanza, jesse. honest. it's just...idk. the last line is heart breaking...

5.5