Alive No More

by X Harlea X   Aug 8, 2008


Staying up at night,
while shaking with excite.
slicing with my kinfe,
no longer has me within fright.

cutting so deep,
so that my life is no longer able to reach.
carrys me into an internal sleep,
i can no longer breath.

slipping into darkness,
not able to stay alarmed.
i am no longer sore,
for i am alive no more.

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  • 16 years ago

    by CHEMICALcaitlin

    I liked this a lot, and I really loved the imagery you used. It made the words come to life. I thought it had a nice flow to it, too. Oh, one small spelling error you made in the first stanza "slicing with my kinfe," I think you meant knife. Anyway, it was a really good poem, even though it was short, so 5/5

    Caitlin =]

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