Once Upon a Time : a Bathroom in the dream

by Mister 47   Aug 8, 2008


Once I woke up in the night too sleepy to walk
I could not find the way to the toilet or yell or talk

I stand barely , and I walk small steps one by one
To reach that place seem could not be done

I reached at last and I started to do
What I am their for and I could not wait too

I sit and relax and here I got them free
But the strangest thing just happen to me

I felt the warm from my legs coming down
So I open my eyes so it can be shown

People I did a horrible mistake
It was really happening and not a fake

At the end I tell you an advice for all
Get your clothes down before you let it fall

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Always good to have a laugh to start your morning. You are definatly a little comedian inside, I would have never guessed. Well done though, if you can make your readers laugh, then it's a good poem. Great work. 5/5. (:

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Omg! that was funny and awsome! 5/5
    **harlea

  • 16 years ago

    by CourtneyyContageous

    LOL!!! Omg this was funny moucha! hahaz. wow i really hope this didn't happen to you. And if it did, looks like you better drop them pants before you go agian >.<

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Lol. Nice. XD Four out of five.

  • 16 years ago

    by xXbrandyXx

    Haha....now that made me laugh....you did a good job on it!!