Wow, great word choice and the scenery you have placed in my mind is amazing! Great work, so much beauty in such a small amount of words. Keep writing, always and forever.....

Hey Crystal, Ive never been away but those who have always seem to long to come home. Were here waiting for ya!!!!!!! :)

Hey Crystal this was absolutely beautiful
you paint a vivid and lovely picture of where your heart wants to be.Very well written

Grant

Beautifully picturised... wonderful imagery... deers and birds and wild rivers.. i love that...
I have never heard of this form...
thanks for introducing it... it would have been better if you had mentioned as a note the syllable count if there is any... or how it is written.. :)

keep writting..

Perfect images. How I wish I was there.