"Sing to me, darling,
and help me to rest.
Tell me that you care,
and that I'm the best."

^Beautifully written, great opening and the rhyming is wonderful!

"Sing to me, sweetie,
and hold me tonight.
Tell me I'm the colour,
to your black and white."

^Very sweet words here, and I like how in every stanza you start out with, "Sing to me..."

"Sing to me, my regret,
this nice little lullaby.
You said you're sorry,
but you tend to lie."

^I noticed that there was no rhyming here, that kind of throw me off but otherwise I liked it....

"Stop singing to me,
'cause we're through.
I have moved on,
and you should, too."

^Good ending, and I like how you wrote this. Keep writing, always and forever....

Though this would make great song lyrics the poetic metaphors stand out

I love it

Great poem.

It flows well from sentance to sentance.

Reminded me of a long lasting relationship summed up in a few stanza's.

5/5