Waiting for you...
by Lil Ash Aug 8, 2008
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She stands still as she gazes upon the stars as they shine and reflect her shadow of death, She crys she waits knowing she has been completely left. Ill wait for you forever ill never leave you she says with her hands on her face, She whines and falls on her knees with great grace. |
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16 years ago
Ok dood, please use spell checker before you post up your poems....
All the things in [ ] is what i think you should place there/or change...
She stands still as she gazes upon the stars as they shine and reflect her shadow of death,[.] She cr[ies][,] she waits knowing she has been completely left. I[']ll wait for you forever i[']ll never leave you she says with her hands on her face, She whines and falls on her knees with great grace.
Holding her hands together[,] wishing but waiting for her dream to come true, a tear glitters and shines[,] shes like a ghost you can walk right through.[ ]The wind whistles like a ghost train dropping of[f] passengers who don't say a word, If only he gave that extra bit of care.
She closes her eyes imagining his shivering arms wrapped around her w[aist], And then he would smile at her and say i[']ll keep you safe.[ ]As she lies on her back rain crashing down and running down her face, Trying to rub the image of him [for he is a disgrace].
Glancing at the waves that crash along the shaw, she wishes the time she had with him was a little more. Hold her heart with a upside down smile, She says [I] would do anything for you [I] would even run 1000 miles.
Good job though :) -
16 years ago
OMG... I can't believe...Did you wrote this for me? Nahhh...just kidding :]
I can tell that this is like my story...You rock girl...really...this is simply amazing...
I'm crying now x|
10/5 :]
