OMG... I can't believe...Did you wrote this for me? Nahhh...just kidding :]
I can tell that this is like my story...You rock girl...really...this is simply amazing...
I'm crying now x|
10/5 :]

Ok dood, please use spell checker before you post up your poems....

All the things in [ ] is what i think you should place there/or change...

She stands still as she gazes upon the stars as they shine and reflect her shadow of death,[.] She cr[ies][,] she waits knowing she has been completely left. I[']ll wait for you forever i[']ll never leave you she says with her hands on her face, She whines and falls on her knees with great grace.

Holding her hands together[,] wishing but waiting for her dream to come true, a tear glitters and shines[,] shes like a ghost you can walk right through.[ ]The wind whistles like a ghost train dropping of[f] passengers who don't say a word, If only he gave that extra bit of care.

She closes her eyes imagining his shivering arms wrapped around her w[aist], And then he would smile at her and say i[']ll keep you safe.[ ]As she lies on her back rain crashing down and running down her face, Trying to rub the image of him [for he is a disgrace].

Glancing at the waves that crash along the shaw, she wishes the time she had with him was a little more. Hold her heart with a upside down smile, She says [I] would do anything for you [I] would even run 1000 miles.

Good job though :)