Rain on my window (collab rap wit amber)

by Dustin S   Aug 9, 2008


Thunder strikes earth from above.
Under the covers, rain pours like dove's love.
Scared, shaking like two quivering hands
Cared and concerned, thinks no one understands.
To paralyzed to move, it proves he's frightened.
You can bet the grove of rain, he wish would lighten.
Weather man said that soon, it could brighten.
One question goes to the head. Where's definition?
He said that yesterday! Sounds like a repetition.
All that is wanted is light. Not darkness all night.
Some may like it but it turns to black instead of white.
Instead, nobody wants to tell the truth on why
When I look up and I see the sky cry.
Seeing this just starts bringing my heart sorrow.
Cause I cant tell if the world will come apart tommorow.
Will this rain ever cease? The sky turns dark,
Cant step on the grass, or the flood is invited.
It kept up so long, not once let up or lighted.
Relentless, sounds like giants when they go.
Look over and you can see Rain on my window.

Think this is suppost to be a show.
Or a signal for me to go.
But right now I wish rain would slow.
There's to much Rain on my window.

amber-

The rain starts of as meerly a sprinkle.
So peaceful and calm putting a twinkle
in our eyes as we stare outside in awe.
We end up forgetting about the flaw
we saw in others and the world.
Then the anger in the rain becomes unfurled
as it pounds upon us. Hitting us again
and again when...

Think this is suppost to be a show.
Or a signal for me to go.
But right now I wish rain would slow.
There's to much Rain on my window.

me-

Like a fight, its pouring down with anger.
Goin on all night, water fills in the hanger.
Just keep flowin, continues goin, when
Is this gonna stop? It doesnt sem to en'.
Search everywhere, try to see a smile,
But they know it'll be like this for a while.
So depression has reached the soul,
No confession was breached in whole.
Just mutters coming out in stutters.
Is this in the head? Was that really said?
Or am I gettin delirious from all the dread.
Who knows anymore. I only here the sound
Of rain hittin the roof with a heavy pound.
The green in the grass has gone. Faded.
To long without sun. Tired of bein shaded.
Is it normal to write informal like this?
When it is daylight that you dearly miss?
We shiver everytime we feel a breeze.
Thinkin that with every one, we freeze.
I dont want this. Its a no. Rain, just please go.

Think this is suppost to be a show.
Or a signal for me to go.
But right now I wish rain would slow.
There's to much Rain on my window.

*It's raining over here and I hate it*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Wow ling one , buit too muich detials make you into the story!!!
    wow ,

    great work
    although it took me 2 tiem to fully get it into my head
    :D
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