She used a sword to killed me out of her life

by mvep   Aug 9, 2008


It was dawn rained lightening and thunder rolled when she called

I felt the cold wind at my back.

She sounded like an angle with her softens voice.

What came to her mouth was really I couldn't believe it.

She used a sword to kill me out of her life.

I hadn't forgotten the wound day of my life.

I trusted her I deeply love her with all my heart.

I never thought she will break my heart that way.

I guess I was wrong.

All the time I dreamy her I couldn't slept.

Her beauty image still hunting me every where I go what ever I do.

Mine dream girl forever.

I will never forget you.

I never met a girl like you.

You are the only brilliant girl I know and I trust.

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  • 16 years ago

    by firexflys

    It was not bad i like the story becasue i have been down this road with people. though i do think that proof reading is a must i have been writting for about 6 years and i still have to do it.
    but over all very nice 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Amir Riveroll

    Nice poem...

  • 16 years ago

    by Valerie

    I think this is your best one, i like it!:)
    but i agree with the others on the grammar

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow...this was a really good poem....but again i feel i need to say that you really need to work on your grammar because even though this was a good poem it was difficult to understand...

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaitlyn Cabrera

    This is amazing! Love this poem: ) Keep it up!!

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