The Assassin

by rich sanchez   Aug 9, 2008


Hiding in the shadows of the cold dark night,

Is an assassin who is oh so still,

Waiting until the time is right,

Hiding in the shadows,keeping clear out of sight,

Getting ready to close in on the kill,

By using his cunning and Witt full skill,

But he'll have to strike and be unexpected

To go unnoticed and undetected,

For the one he seeks to kill is fully protected,

And will notice even the faintest sign,

He will not drop his defensive lines,

So like a thief in the night the assassin strikes without a clue,

Catching the victim off-guard,

His life he unmercifully slew,

And on the following morning,

When the townspeople heard about the crime,

The streets were filled with tears and mourning

And the church bells began to chime,

Then the assassin retreated to his den,

Only for a time...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    Wow-thus is really-i dunno-eerie? kinda sticks to the back of your mind..... i like it. The rhyme pattern is unpredictable but works-doesnt hinder the flow.
    I really like this one!!!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jane

    Ok this is more my style...i love dark deep sneeky poems...you might have told from the poem of mine you commented on...but i do like this poem...the flows a little bit scratchy but the poem pulls together by the topic...good writing...

  • 16 years ago

    by january friend

    That was amazing, it had a great story to it and was very descriptive.

  • 16 years ago

    by AngelEyez89

    Thanks for your comment.

    wow youre really good :D

    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Another poem of good concept. It kept me interesting for the concept. I always enjoy different kind of poetry. This one is good.