Wow, you two are amazing together. I can really relate to this poem, and for me that's always a plus. The story of two lovers, ripped apart, only to find themselves back in the arms of one another. You opened the poem so graciously.The scene was set, and from then on it was smooth sailing.

"Forever they remained as one,
for they were meant to be together.
Never did they let go for one second,
for their love was unlike any other."

I love the way this poem was ended. In love, and love is the best feeling to have.

The only critique I have, is more of an opinion, I've been told by a few people, and even an english teacher of mine. There's really no need for the periods and commas after a line. It's believed to be an automatic pause.

Great job you two!

5/5

Your thoughts flowed well in this freeverse poem. I cannot find anything to criticise here

The poem was very good, great description. I would argue against the distance thing though because i believe it really does matter, once that longing feeling comes it brings with it a sadness and at times no matter how strong the love, they cannot hold on.

great job,

5/5