Everything to Me
by BeautifulCutter Aug 9, 2008
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He's the first robin in the spring, he's a newborn's lungs starting to scream. |
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16 years ago
K...thanks for the tips or whatever but obviously you haven't read my other stuff.
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16 years ago
I love it its a very good word choice it just needs to be more divided like the words that ryhme dont need to be on the same line they need to be line under line with the way you wrote that 1 line 1 && line 2 ryhme! Aight dats it try dat and ull b fine
