How can u see through the soul
Making me feel like an open door
Feeling weak, with no reason to fight
my day is dead,dragged into the night
sitting alone,wandering my way
with nothing else for u to say
Needed you to pull me away
but u left me in my dying day
i am fading in the blowing wind
lost my self , lost my will
Naked in the rain , standing still
with questions in my mind
how , why , you left without a goodbye..?
i waited my life to cross this line
always waited for you to be mine
so i will not hide its time to try
I'll hopelessly try to fade away from you
starring in the dying sun and the rising moon
Hoping All these feelings will be over soon
Tell me what should i do
you knw i cant see through
Should i fade, Should i stay.?
Watching the sky turning grey
Remembering the time we spent
wishing for all this to end
This one really rocks..It's so sad and touchable...
My favorite stanzas are
Needed you to pull me away
but u left me in my dying day
i am fading in the blowing wind
lost my self , lost my will
Naked in the rain , standing still
with questions in my mind
how , why , you left without a goodbye..?
i waited my life to cross this line
always waited for you to be mine
so i will not hide its time to try
I'll hopelessly try to fade away from you
starring in the dying sun and the rising moon
Hoping All these feelings will be over soon
Ur poem is well-expressed and well written ..I liked that U kept the rhyme and the flow..
" Starring in the dying sun and the rising moon"
Those expressions were Original..I loved them the most...
Good job,plz keep it up5/5..