This one really rocks..It's so sad and touchable...
My favorite stanzas are

Needed you to pull me away
but u left me in my dying day
i am fading in the blowing wind
lost my self , lost my will
Naked in the rain , standing still
with questions in my mind
how , why , you left without a goodbye..?

i waited my life to cross this line
always waited for you to be mine
so i will not hide its time to try
I'll hopelessly try to fade away from you
starring in the dying sun and the rising moon
Hoping All these feelings will be over soon

Ur poem is well-expressed and well written ..I liked that U kept the rhyme and the flow..
" Starring in the dying sun and the rising moon"
Those expressions were Original..I loved them the most...
Good job,plz keep it up5/5..