I love you this much

by rebecca lewis   Aug 9, 2008


He died for our sins
pain tearing through His skin
with arms stretched from right to left
He truly knows how far east is from west
with blood trickling from His crown
slowly and painfully He began to look down
He looked at His mother
grieving and in tears
then at the others
who were angry or in fear
with arms stretched wide
a tear fell from His eye
and as He breathed His last breath
and gave Himself up
He quietly whispered
"I love you this much"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wow, I really like this poem, very heartfelt.

    "He died for our sins
    pain tearing through His skin
    with arms stretched from right to left
    He truly knows how far east is from west"

    Such truthful words here, and I like your rhyming too-

    This poem really tells and describes about Our Savior on the cross, dieing for our sins, and the last breath he breathed. It's amazing how much he loves us, it really is. Great piece though, a pleasure to read. Keep writing, always and forever....

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Hi... First of all I must say I just love the concept of this poem. And your description of it is very good. I enjoyed it's truthfulness! Wonderful poem! Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Amazing piece of work here ! :]

    5/5

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