Comments : THE BEST CURE

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Awesome ryme, great lesson taught here.

    5/5 nice job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Great message here, I like it!

    "When words just arn't enough
    to mend a broken heart it tough"

    "arn't" should be "aren't."
    And for the second line, "it" should be "is".

    "no special tape or even glue
    can change what fate is aimed to do
    so when you're sad and just not sure
    sometimes tears
    are the best cure"

    Excellent rhyme, and good word choice.
    This is a short poem, but very touching.
    Keep writing, alway and forever...