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by HvN
Awesome ryme, great lesson taught here. 5/5 nice job!
by Poet on the Piano
Great message here, I like it! "When words just arn't enough to mend a broken heart it tough" "arn't" should be "aren't." And for the second line, "it" should be "is". "no special tape or even glue can change what fate is aimed to do so when you're sad and just not sure sometimes tears are the best cure" Excellent rhyme, and good word choice. This is a short poem, but very touching. Keep writing, alway and forever...