Life

by Wolf Haines   Aug 9, 2008


Behold the river as day breaks.
Ebbing its way to mountain lakes.
Rippled gently by a cool flurry,
Swirling and flowing in no visible hurry.

Caressing boulders and dancing with reeds.
Quenching thirsts and other needs.
Rising and falling as time dictates.
One way ticket, the sea awaits.

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    I really love how you have nurtured each line with suchclarity and flow. and the reference to life really shows in ur desiprion and writing skill. very good poem 5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    Reminds me of poems by a gifted poet on another site. She is quite amazing and I think anyone would be proud to be compared if they read her work. Shes studing creative writing but takes it to another level

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Another excellent write, I find your poems so different! not so short their pointless and not so long that they become a bore, youv'e got the perfect balence! =]

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