Another excellent write, I find your poems so different! not so short their pointless and not so long that they become a bore, youv'e got the perfect balence! =]

Reminds me of poems by a gifted poet on another site. She is quite amazing and I think anyone would be proud to be compared if they read her work. Shes studing creative writing but takes it to another level

I really love how you have nurtured each line with suchclarity and flow. and the reference to life really shows in ur desiprion and writing skill. very good poem 5*