by Natalie Aug 9, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
How much more can this wretched heart bleed? |
The second stanza was my favorite, describing the rise and fall of the relationship. I enjoyed your word choice and description in this piece, it was a really nice read. There was a subtle sadness to it, it wasn't overbearing and melodramatic, it was accepting. Nice work. |
by Aryaan
Lovely poem! every line is so very poetic. creative piece of writing. the last stanza is fantastic! |