by Courageous Dreamer Aug 10, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
The past is the past, and I will not look back. |
by ReBecca
I am sorry, but I cant feel this as poetry. It is like a diary writing. You could of put all this in a blog or a journal. There is no rhyme, or flow to this at all. |
by Thomas
I, first must say, I love the ending. Look for the good things and life and forget any regrets, any bad times, and anything that doesn't show brighter days. Just live for today and tomorrow, not yesterday. |
by Marc Ortiz
Well, when I was reading this I felt that you were making a promise to yourself. Anyway it was not the best poem from you, but it was still an excellent written piece. Using the last words as the title makes the readers in awe. |
by BREEawNUHH
I really liked this piece. I really liked the message. |
by HvN
Very interesting topic you chose here, I liked it a lot :] |