Comments : The unnoticed shadow

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    It is better much feelings i could feel you much

    the title can be : the unnoticed shadow
    waht you think?

  • 16 years ago

    by Strange and Beautiful

    Wow, um... this was great.
    It's sad though. I felt deep emotion when you met that boy and you were all happy but then he say I don't love you anymore. That sucks. Well written and you did a great job at expressing your feelings.
    5/5

    Jana