Truly a piece of art...lovely work! The words flow and the word choice is also good as well. I enjoyed it!
Take care,
Ignoris

This poem made me realize how your poems like have a couple of stories in to one I think or it may be that im tired. and hey i saw a ryhme or two.
And a unique combo. War and love, makes me wonder why no one has thought of before but original.

I'm speechless. This is so amazing. I love it! Your use of words was wonderful and it flowed quite well. The imagery was also very strong. Keeps up the beautiful work.
~Kayla

You have a brilliant vocabulary. I'm not quite sure what the story is though, a mordant look upon war? Intertwined with an almost sarcastic feeling of love? Or am I way of the mark? Apart from not having much of an idea what it was about, this was a wonderful write. Well done