Talking stars (closing statement)

by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost   Aug 10, 2008


Talking stars, talking stars
You make my thoughts transcend
These mysterious words you speak
I still cannot comprehend

You whisper to me
Breathe in this shade
give in the stillness
And simply taste the blade

Feel this silence
Listen to the silent cry
But I can't believe my purpose for living
Is simply to just die

Talking stars, talking stars
You don't control my fate
If you really want me to die
You're just going to have to wait

My present makes my future
Not my past
This is my closing statement
Be sure its not my last

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  • 16 years ago

    by DaytimeStar

    I really thought it was a new way to say something. Keep writing your crazy awesome with words!!!!! xD im still getting there with the way i use words in a cool way lol

    a random person,
    Diana C.

  • 16 years ago

    by trippetta TC

    OOh I like this one, the repitition has good candence, like a song

  • 16 years ago

    by always the same

    Wow amazing. So true. 5/5