Wholesome redemption

by lost and forgotten   Aug 10, 2008


Sopping wet
and stoned sky high
the future is set
the end is nigh

your choices were made
your actions were done
do you feel deservedly paid?
do you feel overrun?

my heart you broke
and my spirit you took
I'm starting to choke
as i write in this book

the tears they are falling
and the noose is tied tight
i hear misty death calling
am i losing the fight?

dont ask for redemption
dont plead for excuse
the best of intention
the worst of abuse

a scar on the wrist now
and maybe one more
nobody can stop it now
its not like they care anymore

so ill say my goodbyes now
i shall bid you adieu
you'll come and you'll scream how!?
and see the words.... F**K YOU

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by darkened star

    This poem is so full of emotion, its so strong and real. i can feel the stregth of them as you write. the word flow is excellent and i love your choice of words.

    my favourite stanza is:

    "the tears they are falling
    and the noose is tied tight
    i hear misty death calling
    am i losing the fight?"

    hope your not losing the fight, love your topic of poetry as its so easy to relate to and life like. keep it up :)

More Poems By lost and forgotten