This poem is so full of emotion, its so strong and real. i can feel the stregth of them as you write. the word flow is excellent and i love your choice of words.

my favourite stanza is:

"the tears they are falling
and the noose is tied tight
i hear misty death calling
am i losing the fight?"

hope your not losing the fight, love your topic of poetry as its so easy to relate to and life like. keep it up :)