Am I Dead To You? (Multiple Quinzaine)

by Steven Beesley   Aug 10, 2008


Your heart still does lock me out.
Am I dead to you
for all time?

Sitting here in an abyss.
Did you dig this pit
to keep me?

All my senses are now numb.
Have you killed off all
my feelings?

All the seasons come and go.
But why do they seem
all the same?

Captive with no where to go.
Have you locked my heart,
thrown the key?

Let the torture be gone now.
Would you come now to
bury me?

Quinzaine:

Quinzaine-These syllables are distributed among three lines so that there are seven syllables in the first line, five in the second line and three in the third line (7/5/3). The first line makes a statement. The next two lines ask a question relating to that statement.

Stanza composition:-
1st line -Seven syllables
2nd line - Beginning of question with 5 syllables
3rd line - End of question with 3 syllables

10/8/2008 Steven Beesley (c)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Steve
    Excellent job on this form. Love the statments made and the questions that follow.

    Let the torture be gone now.
    Would you come now to
    bury me?

    This was my favorite.
    Great job!
    Love and hugs
    Cindy