In Your Eyes

by charles   Aug 10, 2008


In my eyes
There's only you
But through your eyes
I can see forever

( this was my first attemt at writing-
was written for my H.S. sweetheart)

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  • 16 years ago

    by PassionCourageTriumph

    I liked it. Simple and sweet and nice to read. I don't know much about poetry, therefore I can not give you an expert answer, but I really like this. Good Job.

  • This is cute how are you??

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Ahh I love it! so much meaning in so little words