Comments : Erupt

  • 16 years ago

    by linkhorizon

    "A single drop
    Born in fright
    You can't escape
    This endless night"

    i loved the mysterious, deep, dreary imagery you conveyed in this stanza. it amazes me how you accomplish portraying big strong emotions in a matter of small lines. i also enjoyed the last stanza, it provided hope and reason in life. overall, great write. brilliant. 5/5 :)