by BREEawNUHH Aug 10, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I know that this is true love, |
This was a good love poem, you described all the typical emotions that someone would feel once they are in love. |
by Sole
Loved the simple words and ideas used in this poem, they made it seem so much like it was straight from the heart, and even if it wasnt, surely that's the mark of an excellently written poem? |
by HvN
Amazing piece of work here, very nice vivid details. My favorite stanza would be: |
This was absolutely an adorable poem, and it had a great rhythm along with it.. which made it sound great. It's really great to have that person that you've been friends with almost all your life and now you have basically given them your heart and love could possibly be developing. It's a beautiful write. 5/5. |
I feel this is written from the heart. The rhythm and rhyme is also icing on the cake |