Lol wow an explicit poem. I was surprised. I also don't do explicit poems unless they are some rape poems [they interest me for some reason]. I really don't know what to say for this one. I'm sorry but I can't really comment on it. But I will give you a 5/5

"Come sweet one.
Come into my dome.
Let me take you to the skies,
and see you back home.

Let me touch you,
and hear you cry my name.
I promise,
You'll never be the same."

^^ I love these opening lines, you manage to pack in so much meaning and emotion within the opening stanzas that I'm instantly drawn into the piece.

"Don't be scared,
Just because this is unknown.
I'll teach you.
Your mind will be blown.

I know you got a man,
I'll be better than him.
I'll fill your cup
way beyond the brim."

^^I love this, because you mention the person you're talking to has already gotten someone and yet you're offering to make it even better, it's naughty and adds a touch of spice to the piece.

"I'll look into your eyes,
when you reach your peak.
I'll leave you
unable to speak."

^^ I wasn't sure about this stanza only because of the fillers at the start of the first and third line. I think it would be much better without them.

"I'll leave you wanting,
so much more.
You just don't know
what you have in store."

^^Love this stanza, so much passion.

"Sweetie, you have a chance.
You can run now.
I'll only do
What you allow.

But take it.
It's your choice.
I promise you'll never forget
the sound of my voice."

^^ I like these stanzas because you're allowing said person to make a choice, and as the reader it makes me wonder which choice they are going to take and leaves me wanting to read more.

"I'm calling your name.
This is your introduction.
Don't be scared,
Meet your seduction."

^^Frikken adore these closing lines, a beautiful and powerful way to wrap up this piece.

Oh my dayum! lol. naw foreal. this one was better than I Love My Sex.

"Don't be scared,
Just because this is unknown.
I'll teach you.
Your mind will be blown."

"I know you got a man,
I'll be better than him.
I'll fill your cup
way beyond the brim."

Cant quite put my finger on it, but these two stanzas were mos def my favorite. I (love) your play on words/usage of vocabulary.

Overall, 5/5.