by H E Losey Aug 10, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
When I was young, I had a dream |
Good job on this poem, I really liked it and it was all so well-thought out. Overall, a very beautiful and heartfelt piece. Keep writing, always and forever... |
Nice flow and so true. |
I loved this write. It was short but it definatly said so much. Something that you will always dream for in life. It was a interesting read to see what you dream for, because we all have our different dreams and hopes for our lives. This one, I will be rating a 5/5 for. I think you put more thought into this one than your others. |