I loved this write. It was short but it definatly said so much. Something that you will always dream for in life. It was a interesting read to see what you dream for, because we all have our different dreams and hopes for our lives. This one, I will be rating a 5/5 for. I think you put more thought into this one than your others.

Nice flow and so true.

Good job on this poem, I really liked it and it was all so well-thought out. Overall, a very beautiful and heartfelt piece. Keep writing, always and forever...