"Rushing,splashing as the the wind blows
the waves making all kind of shows"
^Just to make it easier to read, put a space after the "g" and before the comma....
"lightning brightens the sky all around
as thunder screams in its loudest sound
rain pouring down,filling up the streets
people rushing back to their delectable suites..."
^That was my favorite part, great rhyming and word choice. You definetly painted a picture in my mind!
"the distant color of the sun appear
slowly,the sky starts to clear
the clouds are gracefully moving away
to give the anxious sun its way....."
appear should be appears...
and fix the comma thing too and in any other places you need to fix it in throughout the poem....
"the beauty,the wonder makes you feel
to sit and watch the colors slowly reveal..."
^That part didn't make that much sense together. Try changing the first line so it connects with the second....
Golden rays cut through the clouds
gathered around the sun in crowds
and as its time for the sun to set
more breathtaking colors start to sweat"
^Very vivid imagery here, I liked this a lot!
"the peacefulness makes you sit and stare
this beauty cant be made, not even by a millionaire... "
^cant should be can't....
The ending was okay, not the best though....
Overall, you did a good job with this poem. It has tons of potential but just fix the errors I pointed out. 4/5