Comments : AN UNWANTED CHILD

  • 16 years ago

    by sadeyes

    I kived it I know how you feel I cried as I read it keep up the good work
    Your friend Lisa Ann

  • 16 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This feelings of been alone i can imagine it's hard to bare. Sometimes parents themselves had hard times dealing with their teenagers. It's a pity that they'd forgotten that they were also. Don't and never think that in this world no one cares about you. Continuing writing by doing so this can be a great help.
    If you wanna talk give me a sign.

    Kelleyana.

  • 15 years ago

    by Siham

    Very powerful words from the begining till the end , this poem really touches me cuz sometimes i have the same feeling . great job please keep up . 5/5