I can say nothing but I wish my mother language was English. *sigh* Rhyming and flow and everything seemed to in the right place in this poem. I adore this part of your work very much.

You describe winter very beautifully. There were nice expressions like "Once on the ground, reluctant to melt,
Until at least the spring sun is felt." and "Winter; the beginning and end of every year.".

It is lovely, coloured in Western pastel shade. I would have missed some more colourful spots. But that is my personal opinion. It is impossible to please everyone.

Well done. Enjoyable work. :)

Well done nice flow and image.