So I just realized these two poems are you.
They're very much your shades of personality..jekyll and hyd, sort of...but not. i liked both. you can tell you're more comfortable writing darkly than happily, just by the difference of the tones. but both are very good...

i think you need one more to accompany these two..."realist". *shrugs* it's somewhere inbetween.

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