Comments : I'll forever love you

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Most days I live outside my emotions

    ^^^^ I really really liked this line...its so true...it made me think, oh my gosh...I do that! Its perfect termonology for a lot of people.
    I really think though if people would stop living this way and show some emotion...true emotion...and let people help them....the world would be a little better...people are so used to hiding feelings and then when feelings come out they get judged for them...Im a huge fan of opening up....
    I know I just stressed on only one sentence in the poem...but a poem can speak many different things to different people..that part really hit me
    The whole poem itself was a wonderful piece though! I really enjoyed reading! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by namless unactive account

    Nice poem, keep up the F@#KING AWESOMNESS!!!