^^^^ I really really liked this line...its so true...it made me think, oh my gosh...I do that! Its perfect termonology for a lot of people.
I really think though if people would stop living this way and show some emotion...true emotion...and let people help them....the world would be a little better...people are so used to hiding feelings and then when feelings come out they get judged for them...Im a huge fan of opening up....
I know I just stressed on only one sentence in the poem...but a poem can speak many different things to different people..that part really hit me
The whole poem itself was a wonderful piece though! I really enjoyed reading! :)