You were wrong.

by April   Aug 10, 2008


One cut more.
and i'll be done.
two cuts more.
just a quick last one.
three more cuts.
i'm crying now.
four more cuts.
i don't know how.
five more cuts.
deep with pain.
six more cuts.
and i'm still sane.
seven more cuts.
and blood on the floor.
eight more cuts.
and you're out the door.
nine more cuts.
and going strong.
ten more cuts.
you were wrong.

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  • 16 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    Nice. not much to say about it, but it really is good.

    --TheGothicAlbino

  • 16 years ago

    by Invited

    Liked it and the expression and the way you related to the poem and yourself. Well Done! Some very good work