by East Poetry
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by Danielle
had to read this poem again...it is one of your best |
by Sean Allen
A very rare find the poem world. This poem makes a very interesting and particularly difficult point concerning the troubles and pains associated with abortion. You incorporated those feelings into your poem well. |
I have to say i think you handled a very sensitive subject very well. |
VERY VERY well done, Randy... I have been working on (thinking about) an abortion poem for some time now...but I can't get past the anger I feel and do something non-hateful....but this.... this is AWESOME...and has actually given me a spark of inspiration about how to approach this... hope I can come up with something a fraction as good as this one! |
excellent caught me right up in this poem |
by Amy
Wow Randy!! This is such a wonderful poem!!! You're such a great writer!!! Keep it up!! |
by Michelle
Wow..stunning Randy...agree sensitive subject but one that I most def. agree with you on...very touching...take care, Michelle :) |
by XJulesX
Great poem, one of my favorites, infact you are my favorite on the site. Keep it up! |
by Natalie84
Wow....I like this....I have been in the debate on abortion for a few days now....It keeps going back and forth. I hate it. I don't think it's right. It's amazing to see a man write a poem about it. Great Job....Take care |
by Natalie84
Wow....I like this....I have been in the debate on abortion for a few days now....It keeps going back and forth. I hate it. I don't think it's right. It's amazing to see a man write a poem about it. Great Job....Take care |
by paperdoll
I think this was well done in the sense of the metaphors used and the structure of the poem, but I don't necessarily agree with your point of view. I don't regard an unborn, 3-month old foetus as a human yet, and I think abortion is an essential aspect of birth control. |
by Leah20
Wow, I really liked this poem, I was wondering what it was about all the way through. Abortion is horrible, and unnecessary people need to take more responsibility for their actions |
You surprised me with this one ... wasn't expecting the abortion angle at all ... I was thinking of something else. A hot, hard topic to write and expressed from a unique angle. |
Wow that is a very well written poem that sends out an amazing message |
by Goran Rahim
Good point |
It would be a fine poem, but I am extremly against what you are saying in this poem and in the footnotes, so I feel I can not offer any unbiased information |
by East Poetry
Not a problem, to be honest with you Im not sure about its truths as to whether we live in a pre existance before were born. I just thought it up one day, based of my knowlegde of differant religions. you might like my poem |
"I'm so exited, I just cant wait. |
by East Poetry
Thanks for the advice, I updated my poem and fixed the errors you suggested. Im not that great in the grammar department. lol |