Comments : Demons

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Creative. true.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ignoris

    Nice work, good word choice...rings true.
    Take care,
    Ignoris

  • 15 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Nicly done. had me on the end of my seat wanting to keep reading, i really wish it was longer so that i could just keep reading. nice description of things.

    ibe
    x

  • 15 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    Ohmigawd.
    This is SO good.
    I added it to my favorites.

    "Giving up, giving in
    To the hatred, built within
    Hearts become, deeply heavy
    Morals seem, weak and petty"
    Jeeez, you're SUCH a great writer.
    This poem gave me a lot to think about.

    Absolutely phenomenal bub.
    5/5, once again..
    -me.