I like the fact that it rhymes but what was the meaning for this??

I read this probably 5 times in a row.
I understand, or at least it translates to mean something to me.

I wouldn't have thought to write something like this but it came out well!
Man, it's such a true piece.

4/5, it could've had a smoother flow and it was a bit choppy... But over all it was sincerely good and you're a talented writer.

Keep it up buddy! :)

-Osi