I enjoy your work...you capture specific emotions very well.
By the way, you need to delete the "Itâ??s" things. :)
Take care,
Ignoris

PLEASE surrender to what you really are. A wonderful writer.

Loved this poem. you describe alot. especially all that your feeling. keep up writing. this is one of my favorites. :]] 5/5

Strong pain and emotion. Even though I don't pyhsically damage myself (and I'm not saying that you do....) I think sometimes of the pain I feel which is on that same multitude.Therefore, I can relate in some ways.

For death i await - i love that!
though some of your lines seem forced i still enjoyed reading evey line.

ibe
x

Perfect ending.