Mhmm, very true. I wish all people would think that way in the end...nice work.
Take care,
Ignoris

By far. This is the most brilliantly intriguing poem I have read to date. May I ask? What inspired these words?

I voted this poem into the weekly contest. Win or not win. writer's do NOT lose. I adore it 5/5 a million time's

I loved this poem. It flowed so well! I don't know much about poetry so I can't give you an expert comment, but I can say that this poem simply sounded right and i enjoyed reading it. WELL DONE!!!

Hmmm..
the poem is really smooth and easy going..
the concept is really true and the part of being criticised.....i really can understand...

The ending is great.

Another great poem, liberating for the reader and brings forth ur feelings vivdly. great work and i think this qualifies for a 5*

To tell you the truth i really liked the fact that it's so realistic.

i love it!!!

you brought forth vivid tapestry and raw emotions just kept pouring out.

>>>>>>>good job!!

~mika