Excellent poem. What or who inspired this?

I liked this piece alot. very unique, and the form was creative. you have good inspiration when yuo write it seems. that's a wonderful thing. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Aww. so sad. But i loved it. Really great style. Shanik

Wow!!! that was alot better than mine... u have some real talent... btw i sing lol... i liked it alot! now i have to go read more of ur poems... take care

Interesting poem. I like this.

Truely amazing and inspiring. i really admire your work, and thats hard for me to do.
again, another poem i can relate my past feelings to.

excellent.

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