Escape

by Sheep   Aug 11, 2008


Insanely crowded
closing in
pushing round
start to spin

pressing close
no more room
locked away
like in a tomb

not a space
or air to breath
like fish in cans
pray for peace

can not move
inch or mile
i need to escape
at least for a while

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  • 16 years ago

    by LiveLoveLearnDie

    Nice poem
    except i feel you could work on the 3rd stanza-

    not a space
    or air to breath
    like fish in cans
    pray for peace

    i find that the last two lines of this dont really fit the rest of the poem.
    however, i really do like the 1st stanza especially.

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