Into The Light

by Sora   Aug 11, 2008


Tired eyes,
Shattered lies.
Weak gasps,
A broken past.

On my knees,
Hands together.
Begging please,
Asking why,
It hurts inside.

Unbreakable memories,
That haunt my dreams.
So afraid,
To close my eyes.
Scared of what,
Might come alive.

Words confirmed,
That you've spoken,
Mended, then again broken.

The journey of loneliness,
I have traveled.
As I walked along,
A road of gravel.

He took your love,
Away from me.
He needed an Angel,
So it seems.

My smile faded,
When he walked,
Into the light.
As his life,
Came to an end.
Now all I have,
Is my will,
To be with him again.

This is a kind of out of place poem. i was feeling several different emotions at the time, so i just wrote what i felt and what came to mind. it may not make sense to some ppl but it does to me. thanks for reading! please let me kno what you think.

-Ashlei.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rachele

    Thanks very much for the comment. I have many poems like this that seems like it's all over the place, but it makes sence. I liked it very much. I think you did a great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by TaKe Me As I Am

    Great poem!! I just lost my grandfather and your were words captured the emotions that I felt. The stanzas were inconsistent and a bit jumpy, but the feelings and emotions that were expressed through your words made up for it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    I really liked this one.
    Its really sad but very very good. The stanzas arent constant but i think that with the emotion of the poem it doesnt matter at all.

    Another 5/5 from me!
    Aish

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Wow i really loved this poem because although you wrote it with an intention that has a specific meaning to you any one who reads it can relate in their own way. I loved this poem and due to circumstances i am facing at the moment found that i could really relate, your words were so powerful, u did an amazing job. keep it up 5/5, take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    He took your love,
    Away from me.
    He needed an Angel,
    So it seems.

    ^^^aww...these words are so very sad!
    You did an excelent job on this, the poem is beautiful:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

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