Sorrow (Senryu)

I found this very very powerful...
specially "Hell eclipsed Heaven".. One can interpret it in so many ways... beautiful line...

well written...

I love it =)
You have to teach me those Haiku poems, Lol, I've never written them & people talk about them a lot =(

Great write
Keep it up
& thanks for the lovely comment :))

Wow. This haiku is something to remember.. Very powerful, meaningful. So shortly says a lot. Yes...buildings are built every day. Yes, real hell build on earth, world by world... And ignoring the pain and cost of this building. Nothing more than discusting.

This reminds me how one big shopping mall center was build by Asian workers... Their working conditions were nothing to brag about... But nobody wants to care about that...beautiful shopping mall... Mecca of western people... yuck, yuck yuck...